自己总结出的模版,好像每年的大作文都能用这个写,到时候上考场也用这个写得飞快哈哈哈哈哈

第一段

as is shown above ______ (两幅的用Conversely, By contrast连接) the captions reads “______” (都写)

And what is illustrated in the picture has aroused a heated discuss on the web (都写)

如果第一段字数还不够就加上这个

​the drawing truly reveals:

  • 社会现状用: a status quo that is worthy of our attention。

  • 意义深刻用: a deeper and far-reaching meaning than it appears to be。

第二段

品质话题用

Actually, the cartoon intends to show that instead of little value (or being or being outdated)

  • 社会品质用: ______ is still of great benefit and shall be actively encouraged

  • 个人品质用: ______ is of great significance and will generate certain positive impacts on our daily life and work

科技产品用

​ Despite the efficiency and convenience generated ______, as the cartoon shows, what disturbs me the most is that the overwhelming use of mobile phone may give rise to certain adverse impacts.

To begin with…What’s more….A recent finding…..To some extend

第三段

说什么不好用:

Fortunately, that is not the Day of Judgment. Undoubtedly, enacting feasible measures to curb the ______ should be high on the agenda of departments concerned. What is more, everyone should shape moderate outlook towards ______ and foster rational ______ manner.

社会品德用:

To make the world a better place, the desirable trait of ______ shall be made known, and deserves to be vigorously carried forward. It goes without exaggeration that the society will become a love-sufficient family if ______ becomes a common practice that happens daily.

个人品质用:

In a word, the trait of ______ serves as a fundamental element in pursuing success. Thus, the best way to have a meaningful and productive life is to commit ourselves to striving for a desirable goal with the guidance of this quality.

第二段里可写的废话

xxx品质很重要

______ is an integral part of personal qualities

xxx对人很重要

______ can do much benefit for us to It is helpful for us to

(融入社会:integrate into the social life / 树立正确价值观:develop positive values towards life )

xxxx帮你成功

______ enables you to get an edge over your peers and its absence may lead to one’s poor performance when facing intense competition

xxx品质对社会重要

  • this kind of virtue will set in motion a positive cycle promoting the overall social climate

  • it is remarkably beneficial to construct the harmonious society

浪费时间

  • ______ takes up much time and makes people weary of other important things, ranging from academic works, body building to interest cultivation

  • As we all know, the days of youth should not be idled away and time should be cherished, but ______ wastes one’s hours, and even lavishes days, which leads us to say it kills and even murders youngster’s prime time

改善环境

______ can improve one’s living standards, and make an easy and comfortable life

减轻压力

______ can help everyone reduce stress and relax

身心健康 看书学习

  • can also have a benefit of broaden one’s knowledge and enlarge your eyes .
  • it can help us development an optimistic view toward the world, and extends people’s life expectancy